Sample essay 1: 'Dr. Faustus is a morality play without a moral.' Discuss.
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Sample essay 2: 'Metaphysical poetry values intellect above emotion'. To what extent have you found this to be the case?
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Q. Why are both these examples effective?
TUTOR'S REPLY
Material from a secondary critical source is used appropriately in our first example to support the critical point which is being made. The quotation is adequately integrated into the body of the essay.
The essayist in our second example uses secondary material in order to introduce a particular critical perspective on the subject being discussed (i.e. the nature and status of metaphysical poetry) - but subsequently disagrees with what the quoted critic is saying and argues in favour of an opposing point of view. In doing this, the essayist demonstrates that they are aware of at least some of the different critical positions which exist with regard to metaphysical verse, and also shows that they have the confidence to take issue with the views of others. This illustrates how secondary source material can be introduced in the essay to provide you with something to react against and 'bounce' your own ideas off. Secondary source material does not always have to be used to support directly the argument of the essay.
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