Another example of a more effective introduction to the essay

Example 1

Essay question: 'Pastoral poetry offers no more than an escape from serious concerns.' Does the pastoral poetry you have studied in this unit lead you to agree with this statement?

This is an extract from a student essay in response to the above question:

'The pastoral poem has its roots in the classical conception of the golden age of Eden, where all of mans' needs were met by nature. When studying pastoral poetry it is important to consider that the style, by definition must also contemplate the pleasures of the countryside. Commonly written by urbanites, for urbanites, it is understandable then, that such poetry could be used as a means to escape the complexity and intrigue of courtly life, by trading on the nostalgia that the genre has its foundations in. However, the typical sophistication of the writer may mean that he is unwilling to limit himself to mere praise of rural life, and may use the poetry to reflect other, more complex conceits. Whilst, as said before, the genre has its root in classical civilisation, the poetry considered in this unit dates from the sixteenth and seventeenth centuries, and the poems selected to aid the consideration of the above suggestion are; 'The Golden Age', from Arthur Golding's 'Ovid’s Metamorphoses' (1567), 'The passionate shepherd to his love' by Christopher Marlowe (1599), and Sir Walter Ralegh's 'The nymph’s reply to the shepherd' (1600).'


Q. Why is this effective?

TUTOR'S REPLY

This example demonstrates that the student has analysed the essay question and identified a central critical issue for discussion: pastoral poetry can be used as a means of escapism, but does the fact that those writing in this genre are typically sophisticated and cultured make it possible that pastoral poets are doing something more complex than merely praising rural simplicity?. The introduction thus gives some indication of the ground which the essay is probably going to cover, and says which texts are going to be explored. From this, the reader has some idea of how the essay will proceed and knows to look for the development of certain key ideas in the essay.

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