Tutor comments on sample essay 3
You try to keep to the topic throughout the essay and you make plenty of references to features of three plays. However, your comments mostly take the form of brief, general assertions as you pass rapidly from one point to the next. It would be useful to re-think the opening of your essay to show that you have considered carefully the implications of the title and to set out a clear plan. You can also re-examine the generalisations you make in the course of the essay and consider how you might explain these points more fully. You also need to proof read your essay carefully to make sure that you express yourself clearly.
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